Identify and discuss any “key concepts” or terms used.

I need to review one of my classmate’s papers (Kylie) following this instruction. PS: I also attached my own paper (Yoli) in case you have to compare both.
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In your peer review, please use the following guidelines to take notes while you are reading your partner’s essay. You may write your responses in the form of a letter.
Identify and state the main idea/argument/thesis statement.
Identify and list the key points that support the main idea of the essay.
Identify and discuss any “key concepts” or terms used.
How did the writer use the resource materials to support the key points made? Was there a range of materials used? Were sources cited appropriately in the text? in the List of Works Cited page?
How was your partner’s essay similar to and/or different from yours? Consider this question primarily regarding content and ideas but also style.
Choose 1 or more quotes from this writer that you thought were effective: ie powerful/well written/moving/insightful —first write them here and then explain the reason for your choice(s).
Overall, what were the strengths of this essay?
Name 1 or 2 areas that could be strengthened or developed more.