I also used as a source, a peer reviewed article called having, being and higher education: the marketisation of the university and the transformation of the student into consumer by mile molesworth, elizabeth nixon and richard scullion.

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I also used as a source, a peer reviewed article called Having, being and higher education: the marketisation of the university and the transformation of the student into consumer by Mile Molesworth, Elizabeth Nixon and Richard Scullion.
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