A. Download and read, in full, the two attached papers of the two group members.

A. Download and read, in full, the two attached papers of the two group members. Could be 138 words for each peer review, total of 276 words for the two.
B. Copy and paste the questions below and your full answers to each question into individual comments.
What areas of the paper do you feel could be improved? Point out at least 1-2 areas you think could be improved and provide suggestions for how to improve them.
Look at the original author’s answer to Question 7 in the Self Review. Give more suggestions for these specific areas they believe could be improved.
What areas of the paper do you think are the strongest? Point out at least 1-2 areas you think work really well in the essay.