Submit the revision of your first essay here. Make sure you have page numbers fo

Submit the revision of your first essay here. Make sure you have page numbers for your quotations and structure and that you have written enough pages. Make sure you have works cited. Also, indicate in the margins on your revision what you have revised.
Hello, my essay only has a couple of problems and I don’t know how to fix them; I have quoting issues and wording, and I have a quoting handout that has instructions on quoting below. I also can’t use the phrase ‘IN CONCLUSION”
My teacher commented on the pages that need to be fixed below. Thank you.