Ive included what I wrote and added addittional writings, but it is very messy. 

Ive included what I wrote and added addittional writings, but it is very messy.  I need whatever is written to be condensed and for it to make sense. i included what`the paper requires, the peer review worksheet with feedback at the bottom.  12 point, times new roman, double spaced. headers with page numbers as included.  thank you