Then highlight the clauses that you added.

Need a document separating the ‘subject-noun’, ‘predicate phrases’, and prepositional phrases by color.
The selected writer should re-write the essay and 1) BEGIN EVERY SENTENCE WITH THE SUBJECT OF THE SENTENCE adjectives an exception. 2. Then you may go back and add an introductory clause adding a hook on it 3. then Highlight the clauses that you added.
4 . Make suggestions on what would make this piece of writing stronger.